Now I have a rough copy of my short film I feel like having peer feedback would be very useful to see how I can improve the short film to as high standard as possible. These are the responses that I received from a few people:
Would there be anything you would change?
.'I would change the order as the past scene is in the middle of the short film and is quite confusing'
.'Perhaps make it so he is acting like he is recording a video talking about his time rather than just a narration. It will give it some more sense.'
.'No I felt like it is just fine as it is'.
How effective was the film, did you enjoy it and think it was entertaining?
.'I thought it was very effective however you should make some little changes to make it even more so'
.'It was very entertaining to watch and grabbed my attention most of the way'
.'It was alright however I found it a little dull and repetitive at times'
Did you think it was clear, is there anything that did not make sense?
.'It was clear with the titles and plot, just re arrange the scenes for past first then all the present after.'
.'I found it very clear, simple and understood most of what was happening.'
.'The narration explained a lot of what was happening so that was very useful'.
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